{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36205156","dateCreated":"1300669310","smartDate":"Mar 20, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"christina.m.ponzio","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/christina.m.ponzio","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1281406147\/christina.m.ponzio-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/knowledgeopensdoors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/36205156"},"dateDigested":1531977986,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback","description":"You have some strong evidence to support a super interesting topic.  Let's talk tomorrow about your organization.  The order of your paragraphs--and information included in each--needs to follow your outline and each paragraph should focus on one topic.  This could look something like this:<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI. Introduction - provide interesting info about your topic, but DON'T give evidence (meaning reasons why Latinas aren't graduating).<br \/>\n<br \/>\nII. First Body Paragraph - Why family situations prevent them from graduating<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIII. Second Body Paragraph - Why teachers' lack of support and stereotypes prevent them from graduating<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIV. Third Body Paragraph - Why pregnancy is preventing them from graduating<br \/>\n<br \/>\nV. Fourth Body Paragraph - Why friends and other social pressures prevent them from graduating<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVI. Conclusion Paragraph - What needs to be done differently to help Latinas graduate (you mention this, but don't give any details)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}