{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35989602","dateCreated":"1300294905","smartDate":"Mar 16, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"hernandezm.pae","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/hernandezm.pae","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/knowledgeopensdoors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/35989602"},"dateDigested":1531977987,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"feed back","description":"it tells you how children learn how to read when playing video gamez<br \/>\nkids play games to become better readers<br \/>\nidk<br \/>\nyes<br \/>\nno<br \/>\nhe needs more detailsbout his topic<br \/>\nhow many kids learn from playing video gemes<br \/>\nwhat type of games are good for kids to play","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36204392","body":"I agree with Marvin and Elijah. I have a good understanding of your topic and think you have some very solid evidence to support your argument.  You do a great job of identifying a variety of ways video games can support learning.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI feel like you jump into your argument without introducing it.  As we already talked in class, you need to flesh out your topic sentences for each body paragraph and explain yourself more.  You have a good skeleton for your paper--but your paper needs some more meat :)","dateCreated":"1300668359","smartDate":"Mar 20, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"christina.m.ponzio","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/christina.m.ponzio","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1281406147\/christina.m.ponzio-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}