"Technology is the practical application of knowledge, which has slowly urbanized over the years in hopes of improving people's everyday lives. Is technology for better or for worse? Do new technological devices enrich our lives or make us busier? Analyzing laptops, MP3 players, and cell phones may help to determine a general conclusion about technology and if whether changes in society have improved us humans.Is technology helping us and entertainig us at the same time?" NEED TO CITE AND EXPLAIN THIS PROPERLY Technology is changing our lives and making it more entertaining.
New technology equals easier and entertaining lives. Thanks to people that went to college and dedicated their life to us, we now have a better life. Back in time if you where trying to get in contact with a person from the other side of the country it will be impossible or very expensive but thanks to them people you can write them an email or call them and it only take seconds. AS Ross said, "I am quite hopeful that technology will better enable us to teach critical thinking, advance knowledge, and entertain simultaneously" (2009). EXPLAIN THIS QUOTE AND HOW IT CONNECTS TO WHAT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT
Students that want a better LIVES and TO GET INTO better COLLEGES (LET'S TALK ABOUT NOUN AGREEMENT) go to them schools that have technology and they know they can succeed in life. According to Ross, revolutions of technology are going around the whole world. NEED TO CITE AND EXPLAIN PROPERLY Students also get motivated when they see technology improving in schools. It make them want to do good in school so they can succeed and be a better person. I Pods are also helping students when their at school they can type any question in they I Pods and get the results in seconds. EXPLAIN THIS MORE
Young people learn easier, faster and they actually understand better when they doing work in a computer and not face to face with a teacher.<==THIS LAST PART IS AWESOME--I WISH YOU TALKED MORE ABOUT THIS. Back then (WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY BACK THEN?) it would've take you hours to find a definition or something else but thanks to computers you can find what your looking for in seconds is also very fun. They also can listen to music and it actually help them, because they get distracted when people are talking but when they listen to music they cant hear them and do they work.
WHAT IS THE TOPIC OF THIS PARAGRAPH? Teacher get mad when they see a student texting in class, but what most of them don't know they learning easier ways to take notes, now they can abbreviate better and faster THIS IS A RUN-ON SENTENCE. Facebook is something entertaining and distracting, but if you have any of your teachers you can just ask them any question you have without being face to face with them.Through projectors, student can see the pictures related to their concepts and it makes easy for them to create a rough delineate of the concept in their mind. THIS IS NOT YOUR WRITING--BE SURE TO CITE PROPERLY OR YOU ARE PLAGERIZING So projector make the concept easy to understand for students WHAT DO YOU MEAN HERE?. They can grasp it quickly as well as remember it for long time. So projector created the interest about study in most of the students mind.
This is my conclusion and all of them reasons up there is why we learning in a fun way and getting entertained by doing our work. Thanks for taking the time and actually read my article. NOPE--NOT GOING TO WORK FOR YOUR CONCLUSION.
Ivan De Jesus - 2011
Guarino, Joe. "New technology changing how local students learn?" 2010. www.wpxi.com. 2011.
Ramesh, Raghuvashi. "Can technology help students be better learners?". 16 December 2009. www.britanica.com. 2011.
Ross, Michael. 'Can technology help students be better learners?". 16 December 2009. www.britanica.com. 2011.
New technology equals easier and entertaining lives. Thanks to people that went to college and dedicated their life to us, we now have a better life. Back in time if you where trying to get in contact with a person from the other side of the country it will be impossible or very expensive but thanks to them people you can write them an email or call them and it only take seconds. AS Ross said, "I am quite hopeful that technology will better enable us to teach critical thinking, advance knowledge, and entertain simultaneously" (2009). EXPLAIN THIS QUOTE AND HOW IT CONNECTS TO WHAT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT
Students that want a better LIVES and TO GET INTO better COLLEGES (LET'S TALK ABOUT NOUN AGREEMENT) go to them schools that have technology and they know they can succeed in life. According to Ross, revolutions of technology are going around the whole world. NEED TO CITE AND EXPLAIN PROPERLY Students also get motivated when they see technology improving in schools. It make them want to do good in school so they can succeed and be a better person. I Pods are also helping students when their at school they can type any question in they I Pods and get the results in seconds. EXPLAIN THIS MORE
Young people learn easier, faster and they actually understand better when they doing work in a computer and not face to face with a teacher.<==THIS LAST PART IS AWESOME--I WISH YOU TALKED MORE ABOUT THIS. Back then (WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY BACK THEN?) it would've take you hours to find a definition or something else but thanks to computers you can find what your looking for in seconds is also very fun. They also can listen to music and it actually help them, because they get distracted when people are talking but when they listen to music they cant hear them and do they work.
WHAT IS THE TOPIC OF THIS PARAGRAPH? Teacher get mad when they see a student texting in class, but what most of them don't know they learning easier ways to take notes, now they can abbreviate better and faster THIS IS A RUN-ON SENTENCE. Facebook is something entertaining and distracting, but if you have any of your teachers you can just ask them any question you have without being face to face with them.Through projectors, student can see the pictures related to their concepts and it makes easy for them to create a rough delineate of the concept in their mind. THIS IS NOT YOUR WRITING--BE SURE TO CITE PROPERLY OR YOU ARE PLAGERIZING So projector make the concept easy to understand for students WHAT DO YOU MEAN HERE?. They can grasp it quickly as well as remember it for long time. So projector created the interest about study in most of the students mind.
This is my conclusion and all of them reasons up there is why we learning in a fun way and getting entertained by doing our work. Thanks for taking the time and actually read my article. NOPE--NOT GOING TO WORK FOR YOUR CONCLUSION.
Ivan De Jesus - 2011
Guarino, Joe. "New technology changing how local students learn?" 2010. www.wpxi.com. 2011.
Ramesh, Raghuvashi. "Can technology help students be better learners?". 16 December 2009. www.britanica.com. 2011.
Ross, Michael. 'Can technology help students be better learners?". 16 December 2009. www.britanica.com. 2011.