Latina's aren't graduating on time from high school!
BE SURE TO CAPITALIZE THE BEGINNING OF ALL SENTENCES - CH
YOU NEED TO DEVELOP YOUR INTRODUCTION. Latinas are not graduating on time from high school.
One possible reason why is family problems. some families that come from other countries can't always have enough money to afford a school for their kids. They don't have that chance of going to school. Most times kids of ages 14-17 have to find jobs to support their selfs and families.''some students had to dropout on current ages to get jobs and support their families.
Another important cause of why Latina's dropout is for the stereotyping from teachers and students. Like for example when teachers segregate the students.They treat white,black,and Latina's different ways and the students feel uncomfortable with that and sometimes dropout to not feel like that.''one of some factors cited for the disproportionate high school dropout rate of Latin girls is stereotyping''. DO YOU HAVE EVIDENCE THAT TEACHERS TREAT STUDENTS DIFFERENTLY BASED ON ETHNICITY? RESEARCH HAS BEEN DONE ON THIS--FIND ONE OR TWO QUOTES TO STRENGTHEN THIS POINT. -CH
Most times teachers and schools don't give the support needed for students of non- English speaking so they have a very hard time. ''Bilingual services are non - exsistent or poor at many school and this leads to disillusionment. There is a pervasive negative attitude of school personal toward non - english langugues and people who speak them'' (NAME YEAR). ADD YOUR CITATION AND EXPLAIN WHAT THIS QUOTE MEANS -CH
Latina's often get pregnant by making wrong desisions big mistakes. when that happens some just can't keep doing school because it gets harder for them and they get married.'' It happens offting in hispanic families''. They have to stay home and cook, clean, do their responsibilities while their husband work or try to find jobs.'' 53 percent get pregnant before their 20's. WHERE DID YOU GET THIS INFORMATION? PLEASE CITE IT AND EXPLAIN THE QUOTE. - CH
At times they get drepressed as a normal thing in teens and they just don't know what to do and just dropout.'' teenagers get depress and this affects them in everyway''. ADD CITATION Many Latina's feel caught up between two seemingly polar movements. WHAT DOES THIS MEAN? WHERE IS YOUR CITATION?
Also when they have problems with friends or other people they just get tired of it and don't wanna go back there.'' I think students dropout because they have some problems dealing with friends and they they have a hard time over it''.
THIS SEEMS LIKE IT IS YOUR CONCLUSION--BUT YOU NEED TO DEVELOP IT MORE. Now i see that reseachers and schools are now improving in supporting teenagers.
TO DO LIST: 1) Fix intro 2) Cite all quotes and explain them 3) Develop conclusion
Latina's aren't graduating on time from high school!
BE SURE TO CAPITALIZE THE BEGINNING OF ALL SENTENCES - CH
YOU NEED TO DEVELOP YOUR INTRODUCTION. Latinas are not graduating on time from high school.
One possible reason why is family problems. some families that come from other countries can't always have enough money to afford a school for their kids. They don't have that chance of going to school. Most times kids of ages 14-17 have to find jobs to support their selfs and families.''some students had to dropout on current ages to get jobs and support their families.
Another important cause of why Latina's dropout is for the stereotyping from teachers and students. Like for example when teachers segregate the students.They treat white,black,and Latina's different ways and the students feel uncomfortable with that and sometimes dropout to not feel like that.''one of some factors cited for the disproportionate high school dropout rate of Latin girls is stereotyping''. DO YOU HAVE EVIDENCE THAT TEACHERS TREAT STUDENTS DIFFERENTLY BASED ON ETHNICITY? RESEARCH HAS BEEN DONE ON THIS--FIND ONE OR TWO QUOTES TO STRENGTHEN THIS POINT. -CH
Most times teachers and schools don't give the support needed for students of non- English speaking so they have a very hard time. ''Bilingual services are non - exsistent or poor at many school and this leads to disillusionment. There is a pervasive negative attitude of school personal toward non - english langugues and people who speak them'' (NAME YEAR). ADD YOUR CITATION AND EXPLAIN WHAT THIS QUOTE MEANS -CH
Latina's often get pregnant by making wrong desisions big mistakes. when that happens some just can't keep doing school because it gets harder for them and they get married.'' It happens offting in hispanic families''. They have to stay home and cook, clean, do their responsibilities while their husband work or try to find jobs.'' 53 percent get pregnant before their 20's. WHERE DID YOU GET THIS INFORMATION? PLEASE CITE IT AND EXPLAIN THE QUOTE. - CH
At times they get drepressed as a normal thing in teens and they just don't know what to do and just dropout.'' teenagers get depress and this affects them in everyway''. ADD CITATION Many Latina's feel caught up between two seemingly polar movements. WHAT DOES THIS MEAN? WHERE IS YOUR CITATION?
Also when they have problems with friends or other people they just get tired of it and don't wanna go back there.'' I think students dropout because they have some problems dealing with friends and they they have a hard time over it''.
THIS SEEMS LIKE IT IS YOUR CONCLUSION--BUT YOU NEED TO DEVELOP IT MORE. Now i see that reseachers and schools are now improving in supporting teenagers.
TO DO LIST:
1) Fix intro
2) Cite all quotes and explain them
3) Develop conclusion